Posted December 27, 2014 at 4:21 pm

Hey! This is how a Check,Please! comic comes into being. Making a comic is a fairly long but fun process, with quite a few ups and downs. In fact, I actually made a graph that shows my emotional state during the lifespan of a comic:

THIS HAPPENS WITHOUT FAIL. In my head there is this great, animated, sound-filled cinematic production and then I must translate it into image, like a barbarian, with these CLAW HANDS and ELECTRONIC PLASTIC SLABS!! How cruel!

No, it’s actually fine. I’m just a baby. But if you ever see me on social media, dragging my feet and hinting that you should not expect anything from the next update, I’m probably laying down flats.

Programs I Use:

I. THE SCRIPT/THUMBNAILS

These are how the thumbnails for Comic 2.7 - Parse look. So much potential!! Spoilers!

The scribblings of a madwoman! Props to you if you can figure out what’s going on, I sure can’t.

I’m weird, in that I write the script and do thumbnails for the comic at the same time? More often than not, I’ll write out dialogue and then break it into chunks for panels:

So many mosaics! …..!!! Hey you know what you shouldn’t do? Don’t write the script after you finish drawing the entire comic. I did that for most of the comics in Bitty’s spring semester (idk) and man…it stresses me out and is stupid…don’t…do it.

AFTER I finish the thumbnails and the rough script, then I go back and finalize the script so I can later copy/paste it into InDesign:

II. ROUGHS

For roughs I usually draw right over my thumbnails. In the first pass I try to get the anatomy and clothing of the characters, and I sketch out the background. Then in the second pass I use a different color to draw complicated elements like hands and faces and sometimes add detail to clothing.

III. INK

AH, inking. Where it all comes together. The only thing I’ll point out about this step is that I always try to close my lines because it makes selecting areas to color so much more simple in the next step. That and I use Kyle Websters’s brushes—particularly the (Pentel) Pocket Brush 2 and the 2Smooth 2Be 4Gotten brushes.

This would be a good time to mention that I treat the foreground and background separately, most of the time.

IV. COLOR + LETTERING

I’m clumping these two together so this post won’t be insanely long. And honestly, each of these steps from thumbnailing to speech bubble placement warrants its own post, so maybe I’ll whip a few of those up eventually.

Here’s my workspace in Photoshop at this point:

Swatches guarantee that colors are consistent from comic to comic! So like Bitty isn’t honey-blonde in one and platinum-blonde in the next. I also keep the navigator window open so I won’t have to zoom out to 100% every two minutes.

Here’s my workspace in InDesign.

But coloring and lettering are the very last steps! Check out this gif:

And then I sit around and write a blog post that demonstrates exactly how obsessive I am! Because it’s not enough for me to simply make a comic; I have to throw in world-building at every step.

And for kicks, here’s Bitty’s frog dorm room and his sophomore year room in the Haus. One background I don’t have to redraw every comic (with the exception of S.B. cameos.)

But there you go! ‘Swawesome!

Posted December 25, 2014 at 8:18 pm

★ Notes on Year 2, Comic 5 - Providence Falconers★

✓ OH! SO THIS MEANS JACK IS GOING TO PLAY FOR THE BRUINS, RIGHT? Like the post-it note in panel 5 of comic 2.1 said! WHAT. GO BACK AND READ THE COMIC.

✓ Ooooh this is it. This is Jack’s new team. You invented NHL expansion teams so you wouldn’t have to get into the awkward position of having Jack play for a real hockey team with real people. I mean you said it, not me. If I mention random NHL teams and you’re like “whaat???? how have I never heard of that team!!”, it is because I made a few up! Samwell University does not exist and neither do any of the following:

- Providence Falconers

- Seattle Schooners (I might….already have an entire separate story idea for these losers. *cries*)

- Las Vegas Aces (Kent Parson’s team.)

- HOUSTON AEROS (I BROUGHT THEM BACK. MY HOMETOWN NEEDS HOCKEY.)

✓ *ahem* Ms. Ukazu, I hope you realize the numerous fallacies in creating an NHL expansion team in the city of Providence–let me tell you the history of New England professional and semi-professional hockey and why the NHL has resisted the development of a franchise in Rhode Island dating back to 1978– NOPE SORRY NONE OF THIS IS REALITY BITTY’S TWEETS ARE ME

✓ Another character! A LADY! A GEORGE??? YES WHILE EVERYONE WAS GETTING CAUGHT UP IN THE HOOPLAH GENERATOR THAT IS KENT “A NEW CHALLENGER APPEARS” PARSON I WAS BUSY DRAWING GEORGIA MARTIN, FORMER OLYMPIAN, CURRENT ASST. GM FOR THE FALCONERS AND PROBABLY JACK’S FUTURE BOSS. 

While every other team in the NHL is wondering if Jack will be a liability (i.e., did rehab and America really “fix” him?) and whether Jack’s talent is worth all the extra media attention, George’s is like fuck that, Jack Zimmermann, you are perfect. Fun fact: she used to be a scout. She prides herself in being able to pick ‘em.

Also, I dunno, you can probably guess most of my storylines, but Jack is eventually going to need an executive confidant at some point and who else could be better than a woman in the NHL–a person in a position where they’re a minority blazing a trail?

✓ Georgia Martin? George-A Martin? George RR Martin? Is she going to kill Jack? No, she’s going to be Jack’s boss one day why would she kill Jack? That would upset Bitty.

✓ What, why would Shitty go to law school? This is the first I’ve heard of this! Yeah, it’s been a thing in the extra comics for a while now. Also, Bitty’s Twitter:

Shitty and Jack just walked past the kitchen: “Bro, if you played in Boston and I got into Harvard, we could be ROOMIES AGAIN.”

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) October 30, 2014

✓ TRIVIA QUESTION: What Cambridge bridge did I blatantly ripoff to create the main bridge of Samwell (the Samwell Bridge) that is in the very center of campus the east and west sides?

ANSWER: The John Weeks Bridge at Harvard. On a scale from 1 to 10 how 11 is my boner for New England colleges.

Hey and look at this:

✓ THE COUCH OH HEY! Jack is on the phone in the den/living room/sitting room of the Haus, and you get a better view of THE COUCH. Bitty hates that couch. 

I swear I’m going to get rid of that couch before I graduate…it’s seen the worst of humanity.

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) October 31, 2014

Also, is Chowder taking a nap on that (filthy, horrid) couch going to be a pre-game thing, now?

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) November 14, 2014

I’m going to throw out that couch before I graduate.

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) December 12, 2014

✓ NEXT UP. Jack gets help from Bitty for their history seminar final and Bitty comes to a startling realization.

Posted December 21, 2014 at 12:27 pm

A - Bitty’s room

B - Bitty’s closet

C - Storage

D - The Samwell Men’s Hockey Reading Room (The Roof)

E - Jack’s room

F - Jack and Shitty’s bathroom

G - Shitty’s room

H - Stairs to the attic

I - Rans/Holster/Bitty’s bathroom

J - Stairs to 1st floor

Each of their rooms definitely has more stuff (like chairs! random clothes!–I may do a more detailed diagram of both floors). I drew this before I had the design of Bitty’s room finalized, so you can see that he actually sleeps with his pillows on the other side of his bed so Señor Bunny can make cameos on hisvlog.

You can see that Comic 1.22 - Goodbye for the Summer took place in the hallway. (See the convenient Canadian flag from the “eat more protein” panel?)

In Comic 2.1 - Moved In, it seems as though Bitty is taking a shower in Jack and Shitty’s bathroom–which would probably give extra explanation to Jack’s annoyance. That’s actually a mistake? I totally forgot that the shower in Bitty, Ransom, and Holster’s bathroom doesn’t have a curtain–but you know, maybe now that mistake is just canon.

Anytime Bitty tweets about Shitty being on the roof, he’s referring to the unofficial Samwell Men’s Hockey Reading Room–which is basically a lawn chair on the roof over the porch. Which you first see alllllll the way back in Comic 1.4 - The Haus and then again in Comic 1.22 - Goodbye for the Summer.

Shitty and Jack’s rooms are connected which is an important part of their friendship.

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Posted December 14, 2014 at 5:46 pm

Bitty taking a selfie with Jack’s former teammate, Kent Parson at the Samwell Men’s Hockey Team’s #EpiKegster.

(That’s Ransom’s hand in the corner. He just finished getting a pic with Kent too. (There was probably a line.) AND I ALMOST FORGOT the Most important THING: They’re leaning on the back of the disease-ridden green couch.)

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Posted December 6, 2014 at 6:01 pm

swawesomesanta:

GREETINGS everyone! WOW, what a week we’ve had here at Swawesome Santa HQ! The fic and the art have been pouring in, and we’ve made this handy round-up post for your browsing convenience. Just a reminder about Power Play (PP!)— if a fan work inspires you to create something more, please go for it! Tag it “swawesome santa”! We’ll reblog it! Everyone wins! 

Enjoy all the gifts!

Fic:

Hockeyed Up by notunwise for seas-of-ice-and-fire (Jack/Bitty; M; 14,336; PP!)

Gimme Something Good by musicismyboyfriend for icedkaner (Shitty/Lardo; T; 3,162; PP!)

The Importance of Being Chowder by archexile for brski (Jack/Bitty, Shitty/Lardo, Holster/Ransom; T; 4,623; PP!)

Going Stag by bisexualsteveistheonlysteve for katiegeeks (Jack/Bitty, Shitty/Lardo, Chowder/Nursey/Dex; unrated; 2,687; Chapter ½ WIP; PP!)

Not Only You & Me by lostlenore02 for bottleoffairies (Chowder/Nursey/Dex; unrated; 3,751; PP!)

This Haus is a Home by nervous-breakdown-hat for nicecoasters (Jack/Bitty, Shitty/Lardo; M; 3,728; PP!)

Christmas Isn’t Christmas (Without You) by stevebucky for perihelionic (Jack/Bitty, Holster/Ransom; Gen; 10,409; PP!)

Dancing Over the Ice by capfox for starthekidd (Jack/Bitty; Gen; 2,001; PP!)

Art:

Merry Christmas! by pippintully for lostlenore02 (Ransom & Holster; Gen; PP!)

freshmen by milesbarracuda for capfox (Dex & Chowder & Nursey; Gen)

Against the Boards by wyntera for beanstalkpro (Jack/Bitty; unrated; PP!)

Smooch by wyntera for everyone! (Jack/Bitty; unrated)

Swawesome Seasons Greatings by kelseyamadeus for shadowartblog (Dex/Chowder/Nursey; Gen; PP!)

Just in case you didn’t know, there’s a Check, Please! fanworks exchange going on. Right now. Like right-right now. And you should totally follow the blog and read the fic and look at all the art! 

BUT WAIT THERE’S MORE THIS IS ONLY THE FIRST WEEK. And THERE’S STILL MORE WORKS TO COME! That feeling flooding your brain right now? That’s happy neurotransmitters flying all around your synapses like ‘swawesome?!

Thank you again to northerndownpour and mamaliza for organizing this!

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Posted December 5, 2014 at 7:21 pm

Hey, guys! Reblogging , retweeting, and sharing the comic is the best way to help Check, Please! grow. Thanks so much to all the people who are doing this already. Seriously–awesome write ups, primers and screaming in your friend’s face* † about this person named Eric Bittle keep the comic going. Thank you!

*please don’t scream in your friends’ faces

† meh do what you want i’m not the boss of you

 

★ Notes on Year 2, Comic 4 - Hazeapalooza★

✓ Hazeapalooza: the Samwell Men’s Hockey Initiation Evening. It begins at midnight, with kidnapping the freshmen while they’re in various states of consciousness and undress. 

- With a black sack over the freshman’s head, Ransom and Holster dragged a kicking and screaming Will Poindexter from a Samwell library while winking at the security guard because (a) she was being so cool about this, and (b) Ransom thought she was kinda cute and do you have a shift at the ice rink you look so familiar and hey what do you know i’m on the hockey team–JUSTIN LET’S GO. 

- Derek Nurse woke up to a loud banging and then upon opening the door to his freshmen suite, saw his former Andover teammate, Shitty, in aviators, eye-black and not much else. Distracted and not quite expecting for anyone to see him with his hair like this, he did not notice Larissa Duan behind Shitty, with a black sack in her hands and ready to pounce. 

- Chris Chow heard Jack Zimmermann and Eric Bittles’s voices before actually seeing the upperclassmen, and stood outside his own single wondering (a) why Jack and Bitty were in his room, (b)how they had managed to get in so quickly while he was brushing his teeth, and © what they were arguing about because it sounded important. (“Leave the pie! This doesn’t make sense!” “First, excuse you. Second, you’re excused, because you’re clearly too blind to see that this is a situation that necessitates baked goods. OH, don’t you give me that look, Jack Zimmermann.” “I–okay. Whatever. Just shutup. We can’t let him hear us.” “Hi, Bitty! Is everything all right???” “Aw, Chowder, your jammies are so cute!” “I should’ve gone with Lardo.”) Bitty then asked Chowder to put the black sack they had brought with them over Chowder’s head, and said he couldn’t tell him why, and in the five minutes of confusion that ensued, Jack eventually sighed, dragged the sack from Bitty’s hands, pulled it over the shrieking goaltender’s head, and shoved everyone out the door. 

- With all the freshmen rounded up, Jack elbowed Shitty and laughed about how he was so glad he never had to do any of this. Shitty stared for a very long time at his friend Jack Zimmermann before whispering, “you fucker. you beautiful fucker.”

✓ They seem to be mostly incompetent at hazing. In his senior thesis for the Women’s Gender and Sexuality Studies major, Shitty will in fact note that “when the strictly homosocial and masculine environment of the initiation ritual is even slightly subverted, homemade pies can appear.”

✓ Why is Jack covered in feathers? I legitimately do not know.

✓ In panel 4, what is Dex looking at? I’m pretty sure Dex is wondering who the hell all these random NPCs are, and what they’re doing at his initiation. Considering that there are only 9 named characters on the hockey team (11 if you include Ollie O'Meara and Pacer Wicks–>SOPHOMORES WHOSE FRIENDSHIP CONSISTS SOLELY OF FISTBUMPING. Trivia: how many times have they appeared in the comic? Get this question right and you’ll win–free procrastination!!!!), and that their team has about ~23-ish people, I’m sure Dex is wondering why he never talks to any one but Bitty’s crew.

✓ Using a carefully calibrated graph, show me how drunk everyone was:

Max = ***** 

Shitty: *** 

Ransom: *** 

Holster: *** 

Jack: * 

Lardo: *** 

Bitty: ** 

Dex: ***** 

Nursey: ** 

Chowder: ***********8

✓Shitty’s hair is so long now. Countdown To Will Shitty Cut His Hair For Graduation So His Grandparents Will Attend Even Though They Wanted Him to Go to Harvard and are Wondering Why He Didn’t Major In Economics Like Every Other Knight Male Since 1959? OH! There WILL be talk of this errant Knight progeny all over the cape!

And because someone requested it, without words:

★ Other Stuff★

✓ TAGS. If you track tags, here are the tags I’ll be using for ALL FUTURE UPDATES. “#omgcp extras” for ask-a-wellie responses and various illustrations and “omgcp update” for main comic updates. There’s no tumblr police obviously, so if other people use those tags, you can just stare at them and politely think “shhhhh stop”.

✓ I’ll make a whole post devoted to this BUT HAVE YOU BEEN KEEPING UP WITH ‘SWAWESOME SANTA? That is, the Check, Please! fanworks secret santa exchange run by the indefatigable mamaliza and northerndownpour. IF YOU AREN’T, YOU ARE MISSING OUT. Heaps upon heaps of words have been written about Check, Please! characters and a number of drawings have been drawn by people other than me! Check it out!

✓ If you ordered a Huddle! zine, I’ll be shipping them out by Monday! Will I make more? Yes, but be very very patient! (I…kinda have to…draw this comic as well…)

Posted December 3, 2014 at 12:35 am

A message from shoulja-boy

I just have to wonder- Has anyone ever shaved Shitty's mustache off as a prank?

“But seriously, why would we even do that? Rans? Rans?”

Posted November 28, 2014 at 12:48 am

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Posted November 26, 2014 at 12:00 am

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Posted November 1, 2014 at 5:01 pm

On very rare and very special occasions, Eric R. Bittle will get live-tweety and photo-happy and particularly social media-y. Yesterday was one of those days.

“Seconds before Ransom’s face "got sniped” #RIP" Because Shitty played soccer for two years in middle school and is slightly delusional about his “mad juggling skills”. Everyone on the team has gotten their shit rocked by a soccer ball at least once. 

Dex asked Jack why he wasn’t playing soccer and Jack said “Shitty always manages to hit me in the face before our first game. It’s happened for three years. Not this time.”

Seconds before Ransom’s face “got sniped” #RIP pic.twitter.com/tf1F8BpQog

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) October 31, 2014

BUT BEFORE THAT Chowder passed out on the Haus’s couch while checking his phone or something and Bitty thought it was okay to photograph this in a maternal/creepy way:

Oh no…This is what dorms are for…#SweetBabyChowder pic.twitter.com/hVzmqLPksj

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) October 31, 2014

Rans: DUDE the last time I slept on that couch I got a rash. Chowder: OH NO I FEEL ITCHY

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) October 31, 2014

Do you love how gullible Chowder is? I love how gullible Chowder is. And how he is constantly on edge and ready to freak out about everything. This is why he’s such a good goalie. “Is that puck coming towards me is that puck coming towards me oh no maybe it is wait it definitely is oh no oh no oh no okay okay okay it didn’t but it could’ve that was close hey get out of my crease WHAT WAS THAT”

Lardo: sup boys Lardo: wreck shit tonight (/◕ヮ◕)/:・゚✧~ best manager:・゚✧

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) October 31, 2014

Lardo isn’t talkative so whatever she says is always pretty important. She probably put a hand on Bitty’s shoulder and said “you’ll kill it” and Bitty was like, “wait I have strength now.”

And then of course they wrecked shit:

samwell 3-1!!

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) November 1, 2014

[insert super-detailed boxscore here]

[insert terrible student-paper photos from the Daily here]

[insert picture of Jack’s post-game interview here]

[insert collage of marriage proposal posters that Wellies held up in the stands here (“will that guy named Shitty marry me?”)]

[insert picture of Samwell men’s hockey raising their sticks to the crowd here]

And what do you do when you win your first game of your season? You have a kegster of course.

Jack proposed to be a cat for halloween (probably to make Bitty + Shitty + Lardo shutup and to save himself from a worser fate). But you know? No one really thought he’d follow through with it. Even if Lardo and Bitty gave him little cat ears the day before and EVEN IF Shitty said “YOU HAVEN’T DONE ANYTHING FOR HALLOWEEN FOR THE LAST THREE YEARS THIS IS YOUR LAST SAMWELL HALLOWEEN–how are we even friends?”

And this happened.

Shitty’s 100% sure Jack’s only in costume because he scored twice. But I dunno!!

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) November 1, 2014

Samwell Halloween 2014 pic.twitter.com/dkxLckUf1W

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) November 1, 2014

Shitty: Jack Laurent? YOU’RE my best friend. My BEst friend and you’re beautiful and you’re FINALLY A CAT!

— Eric Bittle (@omgcheckplease) November 1, 2014

Cue Shitty hugging Jack for the rest of the night and wailing “he’s a caaaaat. He’s a ca-a-a-at. I love this beautiful man so &!%@$^* muuuucchhE SCORED TWO GOALS.”

And when they get to that segment on college athlete costumes on College Sports Weekly Recap, they’ll say something like “It looks like Jack Zimmermann was so tired from his great game that evening that he didn’t really care what he was.” “Uhhh I think he’s a cat, Mike.” “He might be.”

ETA: QUICK. What do you think Jack’s reaction to seeing Bitty in a dress was GO.

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